Analysis of Fountain



When you're on that snow capped mountain
And life feels real and strong
Tell me when you've found the fountain
And how it made you belong

I want to believe in myself
and God knows I'm trying
But even with the best health
Humans on this world keep dying

I want to jump in that clear water
Only if it could bring back the youth
Would it make my blood boil hotter
Would it really bring me that proof

Where is this fountain of yours
Is it really holy
I would run the course
Because you're my one and only

A.D. Small
October 15, 2023


Scheme ABAB XCXC DXDX XEXE XD
Poetic Form
Metre 11111110 011101 11111010 0111101 1110101 011110 1101011 10111110 111101110 101111101 11111110 11101111 1111011 111010 11101 01111010 11 010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 544
Words 114
Sentences 3
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 83
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Written on October 15, 2023

Submitted by amberp.35129 on October 24, 2023

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