Analysis of Storm



I wish I was a crystal of sand
Shining away in resplendent glory
Lying on the earth of a forgotten civilization
In the middle of some desert land

I wish I was a little leaf
Dark green, wavy-edged and smooth
Wet by a white waterfall

I wish I was a droplet of dew
Resting on the soft petals of a delicate yellow rose
On a sleepy Friday morning

I wish I was the wind
Floating over grey pebbles and rocks
Of a brittle, rocky desert
Stretching away for miles

I wish I was the stillness of the atmosphere
Sitting in the depths of a dark green rainforest
With the sweet smell of the wet soil accompanying me

I wish I was a deep valley
With golden yellow rocks on either side
Glowing in the deep red of the setting sun

I wish I were a snowflake
Resting among thousands of others
On the needle leaves of a fir tree
In the middle of a snow-white landscape

I wish I could stay out all night
Watching the cloudless, star-lit sky
Seeing the heavens as they opened up
Wishing for things that come and just go by

Today bittersweet thoughts live beyond their time
When I stand, kicking the dust at my feet
As I survive, shaken in my wake
When I see dreams and reality meet

Today I live another day
Watching the misty hills kindle my imagination
The dead leaves being blown away
The air rent with the noises of civilization
A sea of humanity stretched to as far as I can see
The dark grey sky looming overhead
With the realization dawning on me
That I’m living with things I got instead

I see myself walking down a dark boulevard
With the tall, thick trees looming beside
But when I close my eyes, I know
That my heart is where my dreams reside


Scheme ABCA XXX XXX XXXX XXB BDC EXBX XFXF XGEG HCHCBIBI XDXD
Poetic Form
Metre 111101011 1001001010 10101100100010 001011101 11110101 1110101 110110 111101011 101011010100101 10101010 111101 101011001 10101010 100111 11110101010 10001101110 10111011010001 11110110 1101011101 10001110101 111001 100110110 101011011 001010111 11111111 10010111 1001011101 1011110111 0110110111 1111001111 110110011 11110101 01110101 1001011010010 01110101 011101010010 011010011111111 011110101 1010101011 1110111101 1111010110 101111001 11111111 111111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,639
Words 324
Sentences 1
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 3, 4, 3, 3, 4, 4, 4, 8, 4
Lines Amount 44
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 118
Words per stanza (avg) 29

About this poem

In the middle of an existential crisis, I wish I was anyone but me.

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Written on July 31, 2013

Submitted by m.malavika24 on September 07, 2023

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Malavika Madgula

Writer. Coffee-lover. Potterhead. Kopfkino expert. Loves anything New Zealand and dystopian fiction. Freelance writer and editor at Wow Travel and Trip101. more…

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