Analysis of My Lord! My Savior!



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My Lord! My Savior! My wretched, shameful soul is sad;
My life has weathered many portal holes. Is there any expectation of hope?
The Lord's sovereignty kingdom is here. Seize your freedom and take hold of eternity.
Although life passes as a vapor and a wink of the eye, thrust your spirits as a shuttle and grab hold to the words of life.
Holy spirit child, holy spirit child
Girdle up your lowing and take courage.
Fortify your mind so that your armor will be strengthened.
Existence lies only in the redeemer and savior.

2
My Lord! My Savior! Hearken your ears to the cry of the hopelessness.
Can you hear your people crying? Ascend from heaven's throne. We await your arrival--don't postpone your stay. Push back the hazel clouds of heavy dew and see the blanket of suffering beneath your throne.
Beloved Savior! Our only hope for the world.
Breath of your creation, the image of your reflection.
It is life eternity that humanity seek whether above or below.
Dispatch your angels from above to protect us from the evil one.
Death comes as a thief and a robber in the night.

3
My Lord! Heareth every cry but the time is not yet.
He left his word to direct and comfort us in good and bad times.
It seem as though he has forsaken us on some occasion but the sun, the moon, the stars, and the Earth bare witness of his faithfulness.
Be not troubled or distressed. My Lord is spirit and arm to present alpha and omega.
Never sleeping nor slumbering, my Lord is always on post.
The redeemer of life shed his blood in order that we might live.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1 1111011010111 1111010101111001011 011001011111001110100 111010100011011110101001110111 1010110101 1011100110 1011111101110 010110001010 1 1111011110110100 1111101001110110110101011111010111010101011000111 011010101101 11101001011010 11101001010011001101 01110101101110101 111010010001 1 1111001101111 1111101010101011 1111110101110101010101001110111 11101011111001110100010 10101100111111 01111110101111
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,662
Words 306
Sentences 32
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 9, 8, 7
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 51
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 405
Words per stanza (avg) 95

About this poem

This poem is about crying out to God, recognizing who he is in my life, and thanking him for hearing my prayers.

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Written on March 20, 2008

Submitted by marthat.21723 on September 12, 2023

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Martha Taylor

I was born and raised in Chicago, Illinois. I have 7 children. My grandmother played a big part in molding my life. I love jazz and Christian music. I love studying about God's word. I like tennis and bowling and teaching. more…

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