Analysis of Broken glass fills my voice



Broken glass    Fills my voice  
Bloody words come out by choice
Depression and  agony  fuels my voice  illusions become reality I’m absorbing  pain past  compassions Lid as words cut my heart  like razors  I’m compressed with emotions of old they have manifested destruction   Amongst the mind  as my heart dies slowly     Tears no longer exist   I’m just numb to all facts of happiness   No matter how much good I do I’m a  villain trying to make right  I feel for ever blamed standing court for actions of despair  how I do   Say I need help some one to listen   A shoulder to cry on  with out being weak    My kindness has been taken advantage of for the thought of true love and happiness  . I now realize people like me don’t deserve  love   For I am cursed with a broken heart  .


Scheme AAB
Poetic Form Tercet 
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Characters 797
Words 142
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 3
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 200
Words per line (avg) 60
Letters per stanza (avg) 599
Words per stanza (avg) 179

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A few stand points can be viewed from with in this poem . It’s a story of reality for most people who are stuck with no escape and live in this world feeling this exact feeling Who can’t speak out for them selves .

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Written on September 17, 2023

Submitted by coach_n on September 17, 2023

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Marquis nelson

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