Analysis of Bae



Oh, boy as white as the soft sheet on my bed.
Oh, your red lips like the fresh strawberry I rarely taste.
Oh, if you would remember my name, but I do know yours, darling.
Oh, if you would notice how much you have grown up since the last time I saw you.
Oh, that deep but melodic voice like the tenors when they are singing to their lovers.
Oh, if you would put your eyes on me, but I do not want to bother you.
Oh, my chest hurts, my heartbeat is pounding, darling.
Although you do not recognize me, I do it for you.


Scheme ABCDEDCD
Poetic Form
Metre 11111011111 1111101101101 1111010111111110 1111101111111011111 111101011010111101110 111111111111111101 11111111010 111110111111
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 519
Words 113
Sentences 9
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 49
Words per line (avg) 13
Letters per stanza (avg) 390
Words per stanza (avg) 106

About this poem

Just this simple poem dedicated to the softness boy I ever met and had a crush since I was 10 y/o. We come across at least two times per year, even so, he doesn’t recognize me.

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Written on July 14, 2023

Submitted by randomnameawa on September 26, 2023

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