Analysis of Timeless beings

Charles Fields II 1955 (Fort Bragg, NC)



Timeless beings
In a state of reality of pure thought

Lightning strikes of raw intelligence harnessed
Focus supernatural serendipity at paces surreal

Balancing equations In synch with each heartbeat
Feeding the aura of the Vortex of frenzied activity

all accomplished on a smooth plane
A calm face punctuated with a smile

Transformed from within a shared space
Between sentient portals

Accentuated with a wink and a nod
In a gentle whisper

A glancing touch
On the lips (Thank God)

There’s a pulse
starting A spark

jumping across bundles
of formerly inactive synapses,

“horny genes” sounding the alarm
“Make all systems ready for action”

Starting a chain reaction
of secondary effects

Triggering emotions
Long since creation

Practiced Although set aside
Awakening in cycles

Deliberate
Yet not so well understood

A renewed sense
Ascending rhythms

Of an ancient ritual
 So essential for survival

Its root cause
Suppressed

So as not to cancel out
all other desires(Yes, it’s that good)

There’s no denying
its importance

Save that when being a mutually selective choice
We cannot quite steer(almost)

make a choice
in imparting desirable characteristics

as If giving humanity
With a voice in a process

So mystic there are unspoken laws
ingrained in our capacity to establish taboos

unwritten rules In the unrestrained practice
of refined sex

The reproductive ability to make family
Which matters to state the fact

That our ability as social creatures
To maintain some sense of civility remains intact

Other than periods within the realm of war-insanity
Sends our sensibility Totally out of whack

More than a chance of activity
Our supercharged emotions cascade

Over the waterfalls of our climactic orgasms
Coincide With tides of emotions

Making chance encounters irrelevant
For as long as our hook ups

maintain relative permanence
as we raise

Are elevated in awareness
by our offspring

for a fact We can’t resist

who/the what
We are Timeless beings

Stuck here within
this space in time

Proactive
kiss

Copyright ©2023 CEF2


Scheme AX XX XB XX XC DX XD XX CX XE EX FE XC GH XI JJ XX XH KL MX MX BX XX NX BO XO BX BX IF XX LX NK X GA XX PX P
Poetic Form
Metre 1010 001110111 10111010010 100100010011001 10001001111 1001010101100100 10101011 011100101 01101011 01110 0100101001 001010 0101 10111 101 1001 100110 1100010100 10110001 111010110 1001010 110001 100010 11010 101101 0100010 0100 111101 0011 01010 1110100 10101010 111 01 1111101 1100101111 11010 1010 11110010000101 110111 101 001001000010 11100100 101001 110110101 010100100101001 0101000110 1011 0010010011100 1101101 110010011010 10111101000101 1011000101110100 1100100100111 110110100 100101001 10010110010100 01111010 1010100100 11111011 01100100 111 11000010 1101 1011101 101 111010 1101 1101 110 1 101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 2,159
Words 429
Sentences 1
Stanzas 37
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 72
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 45
Words per stanza (avg) 9
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Written on 2015

Submitted by Charles2 on October 06, 2023

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