Analysis of For The Promises I Can't Keep



I wake up another day unrefreshed
With more obstacles that delay
With promises I've made to myself and others
And more opportunities to see me fail

When I complete a promise but fail another
It feels like I shouldn't even try
What good am I if I can't keep my word?
I shouldn't even venture outside

Why is it so hard to stay true to myself?
Why do I always end up being wrong?
Happiness seems like an impossibility
This frustration is more than I can take

But I tell myself I must be resilient
To question myself is to surrender
I must thank the heavens I am still here
Because I'm not ready to join the dead

I have so much work to do
Why didn't I ask for help?
However, it's too late for that
And please know I will find a way


Scheme ABXX CXAA XXAX ACXA AXAB
Poetic Form Etheree  (25%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 11101011 11100101 11001111010 0101001111 110101011010 111110101 1111111111 110101011 1111111111 111111101 10011100100 1010111111 1111111010 110111010 1110101111 0111101101 1111111 1101111 1011111 01111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 731
Words 153
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 114
Words per stanza (avg) 29

About this poem

This about the struggles of my every day life. I have made so many promises that I did not intend on breaking; and yet I have. Failure is unpleasant, but I'll keep on trying and get up. I will try again; then try something else. I am not ready to die. Poetry is the medium that helps me stave off mental illness.

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Written on October 05, 2023

Submitted by adamroycarrigan on October 05, 2023

Modified by adamroycarrigan on October 10, 2023

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Adam Roy Carrigan

I write poetry and it is often terrible. The poetry I wrote previously was so terrible I decided to take a ten year break. However, it seems the decade I decided to do everything but write poetry has seemingly increased my ability to write half-decent poetry. Life is weird. more…

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