Analysis of End .............. My Feeling ( It's My End )
Rania Hosny Abdel Fattah Hassan 1969 (Alexandria)
End .............. My Feeling
( It's My End )
• First of all.. we all do believe that it's God who gave us life & our end is only in God's hand
• & Whatever happened to us, we must beware to fall into strife we have to be patient & asking God for his forgiveness & mercy
• The Worst in life is leave it coz we can't save our soul to fall & bend because we feel lonely without even a friend
• &though our lover's knife killed us, we still care to not let them fall & give them chance to let us down & begging them for a little pity
• But, it's Enough.. I have to see "truth" not only to write
• I have to read my God's message right
• I must understand who are those, whatever they meant to me
• They always depend on me, but they never try once to defend me
• They always pretend they're innocent, though their faults who amend is me
• I trust them as good friend but ,betrayal was their real intent with me
• So, now I'll not surrender but being bold to fight & my life's track not let them but I'll write
• & know how not to be tender with them nor hold to them tight, to get back my own right
• Go on with my life even I'll be alone & End my feeling ( It's My End )
• & show everyone am still alive on land, not dying yet & I'll strive to survive
• Until God with his hand, write my End
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1110 111 111111011111111101110011 1010111101110111111101011101010 01011111111101111011110011001 11010111111111111111111101101010 11011111111011 111111101 1101111101111 1101111110111011 1101110011110111 11111110101110111 1111010110111111111111 11111101111111111111 111111011011110111 110110111110111101 011111111 |
Characters | 1,325 |
Words | 264 |
Sentences | 4 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 17 |
Lines Amount | 17 |
Letters per line (avg) | 55 |
Words per line (avg) | 16 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 936 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 264 |
About this poem
My poem is talking about my desprate time & where people leads me because i was & still thinking about them ... & what i have to do is not surrender & feel it's my end because our lover's will never write our end what ever we did with us .... our END is only in God's hand
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