Analysis of End .............. My Feeling ( It's My End )



End .............. My Feeling  
( It's My End )
• First of all.. we all do believe that it's God who gave us life & our end is only in God's hand
• & Whatever happened to us, we must beware to fall into strife  we have to be patient & asking God for his forgiveness & mercy
• The Worst in life is leave it coz we can't save our soul to fall & bend because we feel lonely without even a friend
• &though our lover's knife killed us, we still care to not let them fall & give them chance to let us down & begging them for a little pity
• But, it's Enough.. I have to see "truth" not only to write
• I have to read  my God's message right
• I must understand who are those, whatever they meant to me
• They always depend on me, but they never try once to defend me
• They always pretend they're innocent, though their faults who amend is me
• I trust them as good friend but ,betrayal was their real intent with me
• So, now I'll not surrender but being bold to fight & my life's track not let them but I'll write
• & know how not to be tender with them nor hold to them tight, to get back my own right
• Go on with my life even I'll be alone & End my feeling ( It's My End )
• & show everyone am still alive on land, not dying yet & I'll strive to survive
• Until God with his hand, write my End


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Poetic Form
Metre 1110 111 111111011111111101110011 1010111101110111111101011101010 01011111111101111011110011001 11010111111111111111111101101010 11011111111011 111111101 1101111101111 1101111110111011 1101110011110111 11111110101110111 1111010110111111111111 11111101111111111111 111111011011110111 110110111110111101 011111111
Characters 1,325
Words 264
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 55
Words per line (avg) 16
Letters per stanza (avg) 936
Words per stanza (avg) 264

About this poem

My poem is talking about my desprate time & where people leads me because i was & still thinking about them ... & what i have to do is not surrender & feel it's my end because our lover's will never write our end what ever we did with us .... our END is only in God's hand

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Written on August 23, 2023

Submitted by rania_hosny12369 on October 05, 2023

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Rania Hosny Abdel Fattah Hassan

Rania Hosny Abdel Fattah Hassan .. an egyptian poems writer "on line" & I published my 1st poem on line " falling down " on 2002 & win "award winning poet" Pin on 2012 from www.poetry.com "Rania Hosny Abdel Fattah Hassan" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2021. Web. 18 Feb. 2021. . more…

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