Analysis of Celestial kiss



In our heart spirits grasp

Divine visions pouring  

As soular wings
reach across the abyss

Whether we’re listening
intent or ignoring

Essential energies
a gift/free to all that will  

Receive its sweet blessing …
a cup overfilled…

As an ocean breeze,
gently extending…  

Waves of radiant ripples
which glow  

As, if to a beat
an observed ebb and flow,  

Currents within oceans
of motions/as if to show  

Flowing through
seemingly endless night  

where stars consummated
with born again insights

Crossing astral plains beyond
further into eternity  

What pulsing fervor
hearts of stars speak  

In a language universal
between brethren suns,  

Providing chants in chorus
to companion moons

Suggesting divine revelation
as theories get so complex

as to become lost to explanation
In the mirage of vanishing illusions

Where all along prophets spoke
mere speculation

Great beyond plans
great imaginative realization

Creative energies
leave our missed understanding

playing in the stardust still,
searching for that divine connection

to explain life/find deeper truth
experience profound spiritual exaltation  

being subject to mortal danger
exposed to the unknown

like tidal waves of unbridled fury  

Though moved with a directed purpose
Amidst patterns of profound complexity

If so how are all these dots connected?  
Falling stars/star fields revolving past

Changing polarity in unison,
like fireflies

Gradually drifting into variable formations

Then, too when rains call air clears cleansed by  
the affinity Between Inter-galactic magnetic fields  

Acting upon within the atmosphere below
A trip through oceans of Earth-airspace,  

We profess familiarity to know by proxy,
scientists following crude rules

of dynamic subatomic forces
chasing particles still unseen

unprepared for the capture
of Gods will

more illusive still
like pieces of a dream

of an elusive force...
relative to the rapture

using toolkits Such as, weather reports
forecasting the unseen,

further still Raindrops near
silently falling through the night

As single drops
collecting in pools under starlight

Which collect Combine
and go on downstream

Overflow from fountain springs
deep and clear  

Starting currents spilling
further downstream

Provide tiny sparks
it takes to complete the arc  

In visions Given means
divinely inspired will

Sparks your mind
Your heart impart

Even in your dreams

Permeating spirituality to the very core,

As celestial imageries stream through space  
into eternity Shooting stars drop around us  

Reaching across the skies far and wide  
Like tracer rounds thick as rain

Utilizing the universal equation…
solving for Cosmic drift,

Angle of deflection
coefficient of gravity

Acceleration
through the galaxy

Creations way
by will...

to be or
not to be

What’s that got to do
with you and me

Some may call fate
Some might call destiny  

Answering in chorus
What time Space exists

If only In our minds

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Scheme X A BX AA CD AE CA XF EF GF XE EX EE HX XG IX JX JG XJ XJ CA DJ XJ HX K IE EE JX G XX FL KX XM HD DN XH XM OE XE XN BO AN XX XD EE X P LI EX JE JE JK XD PK EK EK IX X X
Poetic Form Etheree  (27%)
Tetractys  (25%)
Metre 0101101 011010 111 101001 100100 011010 010100 0111111 011110 011 11101 10010 1110010 11 11101 101101 100110 1101111 101 100101 11100 11011 1010101 10010100 11010 1111 0010010 01101 0101010 10101 01001010 1101110 110111010 00011100010 1101101 1010 1011 1010001010 010100 1101010 100011 101101010 10111101 01000110001 100111010 011001 1101101010 111001010 01101010100 1111111010 101110101 1001000100 110 100010011000010 111111111 0010001010100101 10010101001 01110111 101010011110 10010011 101001010 10100101 011010 111 10101 110101 110101 1001010 101111001 10001 10111 10010101 1101 01001101 10110 01111 101101 101 101010 1011 01101 1110101 010101 0100101 111 1101 10011 1000010010101 1010100111 0101001011011 100101101 1101111 1000010010 101101 1011 0101100 010 10100 0101 11 111 111 01111 1101 1111 111100 100010 11101 1100101 101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 3,101
Words 612
Sentences 4
Stanzas 59
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 1
Lines Amount 110
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 41
Words per stanza (avg) 8
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Written on 2006

Submitted by Charles2 on September 28, 2023

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