Analysis of For A Successful Life.

Brijmohansajal 1946 (India)



Those who do not know about their today,
How will they know about their future......
When there is darkness in their today,
And they are thinking about their tomorrow,
Then it is natural and ridiculous to be surprised,
Unless we improve our today for better tomorrow.....
Thinking about tomorrow is useless and uncertain,
If we win our today, we win our tomorrow too,
If you want to shape your tomorrow then shape it today,
Then tomorrow will take care of itself,
So never waste your today in any case,
Today means now, and it is still important now,
The only loser is the one who loses his courage in advance,
Therefore, it is most important to give importance to know today,
And now means right now without any excuse.........


Scheme ABACDCEFAGHIJAK
Poetic Form
Metre 1111101101 111101110 111100101 0111001101 111100001001101 01101100111001 1001011100010 11110011110011 1111110111101 101111101 11011010101 011101110101 01010101110110001 1111010110101101 01111011001
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 728
Words 143
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 565
Words per stanza (avg) 129

About this poem

Everyone is wishing for success but the success remains away because of their laziness of being delayed for some other time or day and success keeps them away.

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Written on September 11, 2023

Submitted by brijmohanpoply01 on September 26, 2023

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Brijmohansajal

For writing this poem, I have got inspiration from manner less people, Though I can't teach them, but decided to write in this subject. First half was written and the rest half took long time. I am happy to do something in this way and show a path this way. more…

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