Analysis of Unclear Yet Near



If you did not want to be near me,
Why are you here?
And repeatedly to say,
I will miss you.
When around me,
A proving this doing...
That gone you would be to no longer appear.
And all I want from you to do,
Is to make it clear...
Your distance away from me will be,
Neither a warning nor a threat.
But a vision to actually see evaporate.

You are something else.
To convince yourself...
As if without you here,
I would shed tears and experience...
Sleepless nights tormented with grief.
Sorrow and the deepest of regret.
Yet...
There is one thing I am hoping,
You will do to leave left to prove.
With a doing to take me at least ten minutes.
To remember...

Who you were.
And why you were,
That important in my life to prioritize...
A getting on my last nerve.
Done to do everyday.
Until I prayed one day you would disappear!

So...
Please stop warning me,
You will one day threaten to leave and go!
Go!
Do us both a favor.
To unclear yet near our ears to understand.
Heard to hear.
Made understood and I comprehend.

However...
I must say this,
Prolonged to go on unending episodes?
Taking emotions up and down,
As if to feel being on a rollercoaster.
Without a seat belt or strapped in?
Uh...no!
I'm not into that kind of suspense at all.
E...is for nuff!
I have had e'nuff of your stuff.
Part One...done.
Part Two...here will not come,
Having me chewing on popcorn!
Thank you for your service.
Now move on!


Scheme ABCDAEFDFAGX XHBXXGGEXXI IIXXCF JAJJIXBX IXXKIXKXHXKXXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 111111111 1111 0010011 1111 1011 010110 11111111001 01111111 11111 110011111 10010101 101011001010 11101 10101 110111 111100100 1011011 100010101 1 11111110 11111111 101011111110 1010 110 0110 10100111010 0101111 111101 0111111101 1 11101 1111101101 1 111010 10111101101 111 1010101 10 1111 0111101010 10010101 11111010100 01011110 1 11011110111 111 1111111 11 11111 1011011 111110 111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,411
Words 325
Sentences 44
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 12, 11, 6, 8, 15
Lines Amount 52
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 211
Words per stanza (avg) 53
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Written on September 20, 2023

Submitted by lpahtillah on September 20, 2023

Modified by lpahtillah on September 20, 2023

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