Analysis of Common sense

Charles Fields II 1955 (Fort Bragg, NC)



Between people who share common ground
it is most beneficial to share resources

In those who work for the common good…

Those who have other plans
Make unreasonable demands

Lies Watch out for the other guy

Cheat, Bend rules so others Will not find peace

Steal, Manipulating trust to get the better deal

Harm-kill Taking life The family Protector Mother and child History Land and Resources Gold

Seeking to destroy Spirit and soul

Whose greed breaks, trust Creating guilt
Becomes fear

Corrupts the cohesion
Leading others to kill…

Death Gives a temporary respite
Over the lives of those who have suffered

By trying to do right By GOD…

Whose divine Law
which separates the innocent

From the ones who’ve
traded their place in Heaven

For a place of judgement
on a day it is not

Their time nor space
To control

Copyright ©2023 CEF2


Scheme XX X XX X X X X A XX BX XX X XC DB CX XA D
Poetic Form
Metre 011011101 11101011100 011110101 111101 1010001 11110101 1111101111 101001110101 1110101000101001100101001 101011001 11110101 011 010010 101011 11010010 1001111110 11011111 1011 1100100 1011 1011010 101110 101111 1111 101 101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 906
Words 179
Sentences 1
Stanzas 17
Stanza Lengths 2, 1, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 40
Words per stanza (avg) 8
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Written on 2018

Submitted by Charles2 on September 16, 2023

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