Analysis of Wailing Wall

Veronica Toth 1961 (South Australia)



Jerusalem so pristine
Leaving prayers in the cracks
In the wall on paper,
Temple Light
David King and poet
Dark granite strong tomb
Synagogue Altar
Regal sepulchre TORAH

Spectacular Sunrise
On the Temple Mount
Nature’s Great surprise  
Scholar’s delight Talmud
and Mezuzah Ten Commandments  
on Mount Sinai
Moses most beautiful moment

Ethereal Angel messenger
Divine pronouncement
Translucent sign in Clouds
Tactile nutrition mannah
Gathered at dawn
Blessed for a million years

Shabbat Shalom Jehovah,
Yahweh and Adonai; Chasmod (Chumas)
Illuminessence for Noah’s Rainbow
God’s promise to never devastate
the earth again Dove
and olive branch


Scheme ABCXXXCD EXEXXXF CFXAXX DBXXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 0100110 101001 001110 101 101010 11011 1010 10110 01001 10101 10101 100110 00101010 111 10110010 010010100 01010 010101 100101 1011 110101 101010 10111 1111 11011010 01011 0101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 676
Words 113
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 8, 7, 6, 6
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 134
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Submitted by Veronica61 on September 12, 2023

Modified by Veronica61 on October 04, 2023

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