Analysis of Cain and Abel Disasters

Charles Fields II 1955 (Fort Bragg, NC)



If i fell in love with …a Jewish girl,
a Muslim girl A Zulu girl,

or even just
another foolish girl

A foolish man
like me

what would you think?
That’d make me be

Would you even understand?
Or make me fight

just to stand beside her
Just for the right to take her hand

And if i wanted to raise a family
on a piece of land

Would you attack me like
a thief in the night?

Treat me like an enemy
Even take my life

And at the light of day,
you speak of making peace

You say we might be brothers
in our distant past

Being that we share
the same mother

Who are we?   

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Scheme AA XA XB XB CD EC BC XD BF XX XX XE B F
Poetic Form
Metre 1110110101 0101011 1101 010101 0101 11 1111 1111 111001 1111 111010 11011101 01110110100 10111 110111 01001 1111100 10111 010111 111101 1111110 010101 10111 0110 111 101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 628
Words 159
Sentences 5
Stanzas 14
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 1
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 32
Words per stanza (avg) 9
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Written on 2018

Submitted by Charles2 on September 12, 2023

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