Analysis of Woman Mourn



Woman no point in mourning!
Created by a woman's void;
Tears of dread and affliction fill the atmosphere,
A helpless girl is casted out of a gestational tomb.
whacked, and forced to take a breath, she cries out,
the first announcement of many impending wounds

Woman cease those loud cries and tear!
Abuse, disregard, neglected,
tears, suffering, sweat,
told to be happy, pretty and quiet,
no one wants your intellect, laughably you work for respect,
The Bible or the institution was obliged to teach you,
your existence is for men, child-bearing and sex?

Woman just walk through the ruin of our broken world!
There is no garden, just weeds,
you are hated,
after you birth the curse of your Child's judgement
where is Adam, you still have have to plow the ground to eat,
while the man goes out and continues to plant his seeds,
with your burden trying to get substances from your breast,
you whisper, "is this ALL woman where designed for,

Woman get off your knees!
NO Wonder EVE Sinned,
manage those emotions within,
your not the only one to blame, where was ADAM?
Woman you are Forgiven.

Melissa Desartis Miller Given Name

Melissa De Artis Miller


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Poetic Form
Metre 1011010 01010101 11100101010 01011111011 1011101111 010101100101 10111101 0101010 11001 1111010010 111110111101 01010010101111 101011111001 10111010110101 1111011 1110 10110111110 11101111110111 1011100101111 11101011100111 110111101011 101111 11011 10101001 110101111110 1011010 010110101 01011010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,171
Words 232
Sentences 9
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 6, 7, 8, 5, 1, 1
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 151
Words per stanza (avg) 33

About this poem

Reflection on a life of abuse, neglect surrounded by misogynist.

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Written on August 30, 2023

Submitted by LisHealingHands.MDMillerCMA.Silver on August 30, 2023

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