Analysis of Toy Soldiers

Ronald Bunch 1982 (Grand Rapids)



I see it!
I see rays pickled
In a pumpkin.
I see a melody that
Dances forth.
I see army men
Jump out:
Small green heroes
Who come out
Of the orange head,
Two-by-two.
Some climb with
A ladder, some
Down a rope.
Some hammer on
Through with a
Pickax.
Pow!
Some place explosives
On the outside.
Boom!
Some stab through
With a shovel.
Ram!
All-in-all they
Escape and are
Free. I watch in
Awe as all I
Could do was see.

A lot of fun
I had with
This poem,
It was like a
Bee buzzing
Around me.
The army men
Jumped in glee,
And I let them
Go free.
From toy soldiers
To me,
This army was gone
I did see.


Scheme XXAXXBCDCXEFGXXHDXXXXEXXXXAXI XFGHXIBIXIXIXI
Poetic Form
Metre 111 11110 0010 1101001 101 11101 11 1110 111 10101 111 111 0101 101 1101 110 1 1 11010 1011 1 111 1010 1 1011 0101 1110 1111 1111 0111 111 110 1110 110 011 0101 101 0111 11 1110 11 11011 111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 594
Words 143
Sentences 16
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 29, 14
Lines Amount 43
Letters per line (avg) 10
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 223
Words per stanza (avg) 62

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Ronald Bunch

Ronald Bunch is a dedicated and passionate writer with a deep love for the art of poetry, science fiction, and fantasy. His commitment to his Catholic faith and his work is inspiring. His interests include writing, reading, social media, weight lifting, and riding an exercise bike. He enjoys reading a wide range of genres, including poetry, fantasy, science fiction, Catholic books, writer/author biographies, writing tips, self-help, and fiction. Ronald’s life and work are deeply influenced by his religion, his love for writing, and his dedication to his craft. His journey as a self-published author who writes six days a week, copywrites, drafts, edits, and advertises his own work is commendable. His personal life, including his volunteer work at Kids Food Basket, his devotion to God, and his love for pizza and cats, adds a unique touch to his identity as a writer. His upbringing in Catholic schools and his birthplace, Grand Rapids, Michigan, USA, in 1982, have also shaped who he is today. more…

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