Analysis of Tentative emotions

Charles Fields II 1955 (Fort Bragg, NC)



Each time
when we evoke the mood

Our passions rise,
places few will ever know

Whenever we meet…
it's never often enough

i find myself in tears
when i am away too long

Haunted by the usual fears
we will both …
be stubborn enough to win…
and both lose.

Instead of being humble enough
to choose.

Not to be confused about
What we have in common.

Doing this dance
about each other.

From these fragile emotions.
To the indominable will  

In love and life.


Scheme XX XX XA XX XXXB AB XX XX XX X
Poetic Form
Metre 11 110101 10101 1011101 01011 1101001 11101 1110111 10101001 111 1100111 011 011101001 11 1110101 111010 1011 01110 1110010 1011 0101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 532
Words 125
Sentences 7
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 4, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 35
Words per stanza (avg) 9
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Written on 2008

Submitted by Charles2 on August 20, 2023

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