Analysis of I Want Peace To Get And Live It



I want peace to get and live it.
I don't want to believe in myths.
Nowhere on this Earth to see exists.

I want more peace to live it.
Without deceivers to give that free.
I am not one to waste my time or mind,
Wishing to deserve what I need.

I want more of my love to share it.
And less corrupting of a harmony.
Around me to accept and expect to receive.
No! That ain't me.

I was not blessed with life to live,
On my knees to grieve!
I am not a fool to be ruled over.
No!
Nor a maverick claimed on me to be.
I am a comformer with others who love...
And it done to this,
Naturally.

I have a faith kept.
Yes.
And to hear it confessed.
Yes.
I don't imitate, fake or make up,
Lies told to tell knowing that's not me.

What is I want?
More peace.
And what is it I need?
More love and harmony to see.

What is I want?
Love to get and share it.
What is it I need?
Less unnecessary mess to receive and believe,
This is my life to breathe...
Everyday and night out,
Listening to deceivers....
Doing their best,
To plant in minds unconscious...
How to harvest misdeeds.

Everyday and night out.

Everyday and night out.

Everyday and night out.
People learning how to deceive.

Everyday and night out.

Everyday and night out.

Everyday and night out.
Few are left to trust and believe.
Few are left to trust and believe.
Few can be trusted,
To believe.
The life they live.
Without it doubted to believe.
Without it doubted to believe.
Without this doubted to believe,
If fictioned or not.
Without it doubted or believed!

And...
To know it done.
Expecting more of it to come.
Whether fictioned or not.
With a knowing this done.
Accepting more of it to come.
Whether fictioned or not!


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Poetic Form
Metre 11111011 11110101 11111101 1111111 0111111 1111111111 10101111 111111111 0101010100 011101001101 1111 11111111 11111 1110111110 1 1010011111 110111011 01111 1000 11011 1 011101 1 11101111 111110111 1111 11 011111 11010011 1111 111011 11111 101001101001 111111 101011 10011 1011 110110 111001 101011 101011 101011 10101101 101011 101011 101011 11111001 11111001 11110 101 0111 01110101 01110101 01110101 1111 01110101 0 1111 01011111 10111 101011 01011111 10111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,679
Words 397
Sentences 55
Stanzas 14
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 4, 8, 6, 4, 10, 1, 1, 2, 1, 1, 11, 7
Lines Amount 63
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 90
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Written on August 12, 2023

Submitted by lpahtillah on August 12, 2023

Modified by lpahtillah on August 12, 2023

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