Analysis of 'Fall'



When geese fly south, and skies turn grey
Echoes of children, who chose to stay
Outside, still taunt me.

Dinner bells ring, and church choirs sing
But that burnt-leaf smell still
Lingers... to haunt me.

I remember the year when I just wore a sheet
My Halloween costume
To hide I'd been beat

And I still remember 'Bazooka Joe'
To the rescue.
The tastes and the smells, of a little kid's tales,
Paint a fresco...

'Mighty Mouse' was always on his way
But 'Little Joe' always saved the day
The 'Twilight Zone', beckoned me to stay
So I did...

And even as a little kid, I shifted zones, and often hid
Behind white sheets, in the 'Twilight Zone'
The ghostly figure, of
A child alone

60 years later, that burning-leaf smell
Reminds me of 'Bazooka', and those years spent in hell...
And the geese flying south, and the skies turning grey
Are not very far away.
.
Those memories from a child all alone...
Are never very far away...


Scheme AAB XXB CXC DXXD AAAE EFXF GGAA FA
Poetic Form
Metre 11110111 101101111 11111 10110111 111111 10111 101001111101 10101 11111 0110100101 1010 01001101011 1010 10111111 11011101 01110111 111 0101010111010101 01110011 010101 0101 11011011 0111010011101 001101001101 1110101 1 1100101101 11010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 931
Words 187
Sentences 12
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 4, 4, 4, 7
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 100
Words per stanza (avg) 24

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Sketchy reminders of my childhood...

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Submitted by lovingempath on July 30, 2023

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Robin Loving

Sometimes the words flow like a murder of crows. They've held my secrets for the past 65-years. And sometimes they repeat them back to me, and laugh. more…

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