Analysis of August 5th/2023



she said she adored me
now she’s disgusted by me
she said she loved my flaws
now she’s using it against me
she said she wanted forever with me
now she has changed her mind
I want to hold on
but she’s already let go
I promised myself I wouldn’t get attached
she promised that’d she stay
we were doomed from the start anyways


Scheme AABAACDEFGH
Poetic Form
Metre 111011 1101011 111111 11101011 1111001011 111101 11111 1101011 110111101 110111 10110110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 344
Words 74
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 255
Words per stanza (avg) 64
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Submitted by jaxonhurst on August 05, 2023

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