Analysis of Once Upon a Time



Once upon a time I knew him well, a solitary soldier fighting a solitary war

I met him at dawn when the sky was clear, a man so broken that his hurt felt raw

He looked deep into my eyes, wounded, his hands bleeding from the shards of glass he held onto tight

Revealing how a bruised boy grew into a bruised man, a bruised man standing tall, but now too tired to fight

I knew him well and he knew me well, once upon a time, I loved him and he loved me, once upon a time

I was his and he was mine, once upon a time, now he's gone, a life faded into just being, "once upon a time."


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Poetic Form
Metre 1010111110100101001001 11111101110111011111 11101111011101011111101 01010111010110111011111011 11110111110101111011110101 11101111010111101100111010101
Characters 590
Words 135
Sentences 2
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 6
Letters per line (avg) 73
Words per line (avg) 20
Letters per stanza (avg) 73
Words per stanza (avg) 20

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Life and Death

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Written on May 05, 2001

Submitted by GemmaGina on August 02, 2023

Modified by GemmaGina on August 05, 2023

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