Analysis of What can I offer her
Desmond muzite 2002 (Rusape)
What can I offer her?
I asked myself again and again
A heart full of love, a soul full of care
But still, she refused to let me in
I thought I had everything to give
But maybe it wasn't enough
She needed something more to live
A different kind of love
I tried to change, to fit her mold
But it wasn't who I was
I lost myself, my heart grew cold
And still, she didn't budge
It took me time to realize
That love is not a trade
It's not about what you can provide
But how you make her feel, the memories you've made
So now I offer her my friendship
No strings attached, no expectations
Just a bond that will never end
And the love that comes with appreciation
I hope one day she'll see
That I was always here
And that the love I had for her
Was always sincere.
Scheme | AXXX XXXX BXBX XCXC XXXX XXAX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111100 11101001 0111101111 111011110 11111011 11011001 11010111 0100111 11111101 1110111 1111111 011101 1111110 111101 110111101 111101010011 111100110 11011010 10111101 0011110010 111111 11111 01011110 1101 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 762 |
Words | 161 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 24 |
Letters per line (avg) | 25 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 98 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 26 |
About this poem
It’s about the girl l told that I love her but she refused
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