Analysis of Two red cars

Paul Marauder 1962 (Belfast)



I get into my car
and
I put it in gear
But
the clutch won’t Work
and
the wheel won’t steer
I
try to run
but
I don’t get far
Now
I’m stuck In the middle
between
two red cars
Sometimes you just run
out
of gasoline
just
take a look
at
the shape I’m in
I
try to run
but
I don’t get far
Now
I’m stuck in the middle
between
two red cars


Scheme aBcDeBcFGDAHIJKgljmnopFGDAHIJK
Poetic Form Tetractys  (57%)
Etheree  (23%)
Metre 110111 0 11101 1 0111 0 0111 1 111 1 1111 1 110010 01 111 01111 1 110 1 101 1 0110 1 111 1 1111 1 110010 01 111
Characters 357
Words 88
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 30
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 8
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 249
Words per stanza (avg) 75

About this poem

It’s about my grandson who suffers from Lennox Gastaut syndrome going out for a walk. But for a longtime he would only walk about the 50 yards between two red cars in our street

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Submitted by pauljoe77 on July 13, 2023

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