Analysis of WIFI Hi- Hawaii



Like a vixen
Third eye vision
New world creation
Reincarnation living
over volcano
Sparks fly Mr. Romeo
 Spiritual rocks fall

Chosen one cameo
Torrential rains music maestro
Audio visual life is not casual
Then Hawaii on your WIFI
You feel an eruption
Birds by the millions
Extinct go with your??

Instincts
The true facts or fantasy
Hawaii's landscape
Peacock art dynasty  
Fluttering excitement or
resentment living
In a  high castle

Parliament king of birds
Grateful words happy tears   
Accomplishment getting rid of fear  
Hoping you don't get migraine
WIFI what could be worse hospital
stay Mount Sinai
Red crested cardinal

Moves toward your shoulder
stays vividly candid guarded
 and rounded
Hawaiian crow he's spiritual gift
You just know
Hawaii sacredly birds remain
You could never complain


Scheme XAABCCX CCDXAXE XFXFEBD XXXGDXD XHHXCGG
Poetic Form Tetractys  (29%)
Metre 1010 1110 11010 0001010 10010 111010 100011 10110 01011010 10100111100 101111 11110 11010 01111 10 0111100 011 11100 1000101 01010 00110 100111 101101 010010111 101111 1111110 111 110100 101110 11001010 010 0101110001 111 011101 111001
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 834
Words 154
Sentences 3
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 7, 7, 7, 7, 7
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 132
Words per stanza (avg) 25

About this poem

Traveling to Hawaii is the most beautifully place I have ever seen nature I love birds flying wings to everyone's voice let make the right choice Holy rain red crested cardinal love Hawaii sky top

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Written on July 11, 2023

Submitted by on July 11, 2023

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Robin Carretti

Hello I grew up in the City always loved nature also see the beauty in words. I am caring person married I love yoga to relax at moment. If I can help someone through my writing that means everything to me. more…

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