Analysis of Echoes in Twilight



Echoes in Twilight

In the depths of my being, hidden I lie,
A shattered teenager,
Dying on the inside,
Surrounded by false smiles and feigned joy,
While my life fades away, silently in subsides.
My days  count down,
Slipping away,
Without pause, Like theads of time vanishing into the dark,
And within me dwell unspoken words,
Thoughts lost in the vastness of eternity's mark.

Oh, how I long to open myself to others,
To find genuine and sincere friendship true,
But cruel fate has snatched  away from me,
The chance of having companions whole and few.

My spirit resides in lonely shadows' embrace,
Amid hollow laughter and indifferent faces,
And in silence,
Whispers my internal agony,
As the world beyond remains unaware of my traces.

Oh, how many words I whised to utter,
Unifulfilled promises,
Desires left undore,
But my time is running out,
My light fades away,
And in the stillness of night,
I await my rising sun.
May these lines serve as a silent echo.,
Of a broken heart and a shattered soul,
For in the end of my melancholic existence,
Perhaps I'll  find the peace that was always


Scheme A XBXXXXCDXD XEFE XGHFG BGBXCAXXXHX
Poetic Form
Metre 1001 00111101011 01010 101001 010111011 111101100001 1111 1001 01111111000101 001110101 110010111 11111101110 11100001101 1101110111 01110010101 11001010101 011010001010 0010 101010100 1010101011110 1110111110 1100 01011 1111101 11101 0001011 1011101 1111101010 1010100101 100111010010 011101111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,102
Words 225
Sentences 7
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 10, 4, 5, 11
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 172
Words per stanza (avg) 39

About this poem

This poem is about the feelings of a fourteen-year-old boy who is on the verge of taking his own life. He writes a poem (or letter) as a final cry for help, drawing from my own experiences at this young age and the loneliness I feel.

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Written on July 09, 2023

Submitted by carolinagandarela88 on July 09, 2023

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Tania Carolina Gandarela Rivera

At the age of 3-4, I moved from Guadalajara due to conflicts between my parents. At 7-8 years old, they got divorced. At 9 years old, I experienced severe physical abuse from my father, who faced a criminal lawsuit and is now calm. Currently, I am 14 years old, attending school, and living with my mother and younger brother. more…

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