Analysis of Fugitive Sins

Kimberly Tenold 2008 (Missouri)



I don't get how your memory can still get to me
But they won't just let me be
I can't just smile carefree
Every song brings back the things you'd say
The words you'd tell me
Why do they have to be essential to my vocabulary
Every breath I breathe is space put between
The remembrance of our fugitive sins
But if I had the chance
I'd do it all again
Just this time without an end
Then, right now, my heart wouldn't be in the midst of a mend


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Poetic Form
Metre 1111110011111 1111111 11111 1001110111 01111 111111010110100 10011111101 00101101001 111101 111101 1110111 11111101001101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 441
Words 92
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 341
Words per stanza (avg) 90
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Written on June 15, 2023

Submitted by kimberlytenold on June 29, 2023

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Kimberly Tenold

I am a small town coutry girl still in highschool who dreams for big things like most do. Writing has been my passion for as long as I can recall, it's a pass time when I have a lot on my mind. more…

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