Analysis of Fathering Tears



The semen of tomorrow’s rage
burning undelivered
waiting for perdition's womb
vengeance baptized—christened tears

The seed that carries darkness on
planted in the shadows
hiding what we most despise
hatred pregnant—birthing fear

(Dreamsleep: June, 2023)


Scheme XXXX XXXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 0101011 10010 10111 1001101 01110101 10001 1011101 1010101 11
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 263
Words 38
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 70
Words per stanza (avg) 12
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on June 17, 2023

Modified by KurtPhilipBehm on June 18, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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