Analysis of Uncertainty

Jeremy S. Turner 1980 (Mountain View, Arkansas)



No one knows uncertainty like the single mother
Standing outside in her nightdress
At four in the morning with the dew-sodden
Lawn sticking to her bare feet.
Her daughter clutches the stuffed rabbit
She refused to leave behind and
Clings to her mother’s leg,
Hiding her face in fists of cotton fabric.
An infant boy squirms in the woman’s arms
And squalls against her shoulder.
His body is slick, and his face is
Redder than the flames reflected
In her glassy eyes as she stands slack-faced
Watching her present turn to smoke
To be swept away by who knows what wind.


Scheme ABCDEFGHBABIJKL
Poetic Form Tetractys  (27%)
Metre 1110100101010 1011001 11001010110 1101011 010100110 10111010 110101 10010111010 110110011 0101010 110110111 10101010 0010111111 10010111 1110111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 570
Words 105
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 456
Words per stanza (avg) 101

About this poem

A musing on how swiftly catastrophe can happen and unmoor a life.

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Written on June 02, 2014

Submitted by jeremyt.40101 on June 16, 2023

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Jeremy S. Turner

I am a forty-three year old gay man with degrees in English Literature and Theatre. I live in rural Arkansas near the town of Mountain View. I live life for my beautiful nieces and nephews and my cat. more…

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