Analysis of winter breeze

winter breeze 2008 (new hall)



White fluffy snow shimmers in the morning sun, Creating a breathtaking sense.
As the pine trees sway in the breeze a crisp chill passes through my figure
I began breathing in the crisp winds while sitting on the frosty snow taking in the peaceful surroundings.
There is a comforting freshness in the air that tickles my snout.
As the sun shifts behind the clouds, light beams out, Creating  a shimmer that glazes my burnt orange coat.
Angelic breezes flow through my sharp cinnamon ears.
The soft gust feels ever so light.
The gleaming sun never blinks, turning only soft shades of coral; I glance up at the sky yearning about dazzling texters of the clouds as they eliminate my hazel eyes.
With the setting of twilight, my hazel eyes shimmer Brighter then the autumn leaves, places perfectly on Damp wood, soon night falls ever so quickly.
As dawn turns into dusk

Rising ever so gracefully from the snow capped ground.
 Walking elegantly with creamy white paws hauling through the snow.
Taking in the beautiful winter solstice
Trees flow ever so smoothly
The flowing of the trees are like the river
Soft
Slow
Refreshing
Birds above me humming their little song, keeping me company, as I head back to my hut fantasizing about what's for dinner.


Scheme XAXXXXXXBX XCXBAXCXA
Poetic Form
Metre 110110001010100101 10111001011101110 10110001111010101100010010 1101001000111011 1011010111101001011011101 101011111001 01111011 010110110101111011110110011001101110101101 10101111011010101011010011111110110 111011 1010110010111 1010001101110101 10001001010 1110110 01010111010 1 1 010 10111011011011001111111100011110
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,247
Words 227
Sentences 11
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 10, 9
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 53
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 503
Words per stanza (avg) 108

About this poem

I wrote this poem for an assignment in my creative writing class called man vs. animal. I chose to wright about a cinnamon brown winter fox because I adore foxes so much, I'm also big fan on the cold so I put 2 and 2 together and created a beautiful poem on a winter fox in its habitat

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Written on May 14, 2023

Submitted by valentinasarkissian58 on May 14, 2023

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winter breeze

I am a freshman in highs school, I am in creative writing. my poems and story's have been published in my schools magazine many times. I love writing poetry and short story's more…

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