Analysis of SOMEDAY I
SOME DAY I
pour la famille(for my family)
Some day I'll be gone
All my memories will be forgone
My body will be sprayed with chemicals
In our homestead people will flock with vehicles...
The ones who loved me will cry
My sister will cry untill her tears dry
Will there be anyone to wipe her tears
And console her to have better coming years..
People will give false testimonials
As though they've first undergone some tutorials
Some will lie how I was good
The same people who wouldn't lend me their hoods.
People will watch me enter the 6-feet hole
Where my body will be eaten by moles
Mom and dad will grief and collapse
As they watch me being laid there, a corpse.
They will decorate my graveyard with tiles
Mum will keep to safety my files
My soul will lay there in one peace
And the congregation will all say, 'Pionéer rest in Peace'.
When that time comes dad
Know my job will have been done
Mum, dad and my siblings don't cry
So please wipe my wife's tears dry.
©Pionéer_ke✍️
3.1.3Diaries
Scheme | AXXXBB AAXX BBXX XXXX CCDD XXAA XX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111 11111100 11111 111001101 1101111100 010110111100 0111111 110111011 111101101 01001110101 101110100 11110110100 1111111 01101101111 1011110011 1110111011 10111001 1111101101 11101111 11111011 11111011 0001011110101 11111 1111111 11011011 1111111 11 100 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,020 |
Words | 203 |
Sentences | 9 |
Stanzas | 7 |
Stanza Lengths | 6, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2 |
Lines Amount | 28 |
Letters per line (avg) | 28 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 112 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 27 |
About this poem
Is about the loss trying to convince my confidant that even though it happened, life has to move on.
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