Analysis of BULDING MY CASTLE

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Here I sit, watching the sunrise inside the sand as they continue to throw their stones at me, not knowing I am already stoned, so I am building my castle in the sand, laughing at them because now they are becoming the monkeys in my circus.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1111001010111010111111110110101111101100011011011110100100110
Characters 240
Words 46
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
Lines Amount 1
Letters per line (avg) 190
Words per line (avg) 46
Letters per stanza (avg) 190
Words per stanza (avg) 46
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Written on June 03, 2023

Submitted by Oakley on June 03, 2023

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I have been writing for 40 years my poetry is about life,death love,and redemption. after having two near death expiercences and a TBI my poetry has become more spirtual more…

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