Analysis of The air is still and feels timeless



Cross breeze is gentle and outside is quiet
What I imagine it was before cars and bridges and phones
I want to breath and remember it but
Feel angry
Stubborn and petulant
If I were not going through this life thing
Would I notice ?
Another reason to add to the list
Of reasons
Justifications
My punishment

Just like the air my thinking
Timeless and gentle
See
Now you know  


Scheme AXABCDXXEEC DXBX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (33%)
Metre 11110011110 110101101101001 1111001011 110 100100 1101101111 1110 0101011101 110 0010 1100 1101110 10010 1 111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 389
Words 84
Sentences 2
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 11, 4
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 151
Words per stanza (avg) 35

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Written on May 10, 2023

Submitted by desmond.s.nyc on May 27, 2023

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