Analysis of BRILLIANT MIND

mad hippie poet 1974 (new jersey)



I keep waking up at the same damn time, my back and legs in full spasms. The pain was becoming so surreal that it was becoming all I knew in these continuing years of my life, but at least after all my days, they dropped from the calendar. I am left with one hell of a brilliant mind giving me words that make sentences to fill these blood-awful lines.

They should pickle my brain, put it in a jar, and exhibit it in some fancy museum that I would get kicked out of for spraying my words of wisdom on more than the bathroom wall. I was never a king nor a queen, so from grace, I can not fall.

I am laying here because that is all that I can do it seems now I'm listening to some jazz it's so smooth, just like a babies ass, and I'm getting distracted by the bird outside on my porch pecking away at the seeds I just planted and I'm in amazement of this God damn brilliant mind and all it needs to continue on and feed


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Characters 919
Words 190
Sentences 6
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 238
Words per line (avg) 62
Letters per stanza (avg) 238
Words per stanza (avg) 62
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Written on May 24, 2023

Submitted by Oakley on May 24, 2023

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mad hippie poet

I have been writing for 40 years my poetry is about life,death love,and redemption. after having two near death expiercences and a TBI my poetry has become more spirtual more…

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