Analysis of GOD'S ARMY



 I've wasted my time here on earthly goods,
never really doing just what I should.
  My heart cries out to God in pain,
as I hold on tight to my saviors name.
  For all these things, they shall soon end,
this is for those who have an ear to lend.
  The wasted time and day's that I've put in,
only lead's deeper to the grave within.
  I can't change any of this you see,
the only thing I can truly change is me..
  The way I look at the world today,
by His Spirit, He let's me know that I'm okay.
  Down a new road, a new path you see,
that is where my Lord hath put me.
  He set me free from those things I were bound,
and now from my heart and lip's a brand new sound.
  Life is so full of it's twist and turns,
people only caring about their own concern's.
  Oh I declare that my Jesus is real,
for I know whom I hear, see and feel.
  The touch of a love that's so sweet you see,
in that love He died for both you and me.
  I want to be free in my mind, heart and spirit,
singing it loud and clear for all to hear it.
  I claim His Love as I hold on to His hand,
as He guide's me through to the promised land.
  I must listen for his voice to lead,
as I lay quietly, my soul He doth feed.
  If I were to break down and cry,
let it to be in the Lord here's why.
 Nothing...and I mean nothing
can tear me apart,
as long as I allow JESUS to live in my heart.
  Though the world around me seems to fall,
I know for sure in Jesus' name I can call.
  They'll be those who will always disagree,
that's because they haven't experienced being set free.
  No matter what I face each day I may live,
unto God... my all.. help me to truly give.
  LORD have Mercy on my human heart,
I need you to be my all in all, help me do my part.
  When I stumble, I know I am going to fall,
your Name from my lip's please help me call.
  And as I am out in this wilderness you see,
I am and I shall go out in my.             "Lord's army"


Scheme ABCDEEFFGGHHGGIIJJKKGGLMNNOPQQRSSTTGGUVSSTTGG
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1101111101 1010101111 11111101 1111111101 11111111 1111111111 0101011110 1011010101 111101111 01011110111 011110101 11101111111 101101111 11111111 1111111101 01111010111 111111101 101010011101 1101111011 111111101 0110111111 0111111101 111110111010 10110111111 11111111111 1111110101 111011111 11110011111 11011101 111100111 11110 11101 1111011011011 101011111 11110101111 111111001 10111001001011 11011111111 10111111101 111011101 11111110111111 111011111011 111111111 011110110011 110111101110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,920
Words 444
Sentences 26
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 45
Lines Amount 45
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,383
Words per stanza (avg) 411

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Planting, tending, watering the seed's of life and blessings..

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Written on May 23, 2023

Submitted by 1jessyjamespoems3 on May 23, 2023

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