Analysis of A LIFE TIME



we've cried many tears, yet it's Seem's. Like we've loved.
for a lifetime though those years. I must have tangled more. than my heart for I no longer feel like your truly mine. we did do something that would last a lifetime.

we created something beautiful both yours and mine my heart is filled with sadness.regreat and sorrow.
will I find you with peace, love, and happiness. I wish I could crawl inside your mind to find the answers to your love and make you mine.

I wish there was a key too your heart, but I wouldn't know where to find it or ever start.

my heart is full of sadness longing for the day. I can stop the madness.

my love for you puzzles me, I'm crying and trying to stand this test but if my love is vain.

I must be laid to rest!!!!!   


Scheme XX XX X X X X
Poetic Form
Metre 11101111111 101111111101111111101111011111011101 1010101001101111111010 11111110100111110111110101110111 1111011111110111111101 111111010101111010 11111011100101111111111 111111
Characters 762
Words 160
Sentences 16
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 72
Words per line (avg) 18
Letters per stanza (avg) 96
Words per stanza (avg) 25

About this poem

The poem based off my life.

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Written on October 30, 1992

Submitted by jetliner on May 22, 2023

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A LIFETIME

JUST BEING MY NORMAL SELF AS I LIVE DAY TO DAY. WITH A WHOLE LOT OF THINGS THAT I POUR OUT OF MY HEART. more…

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