Analysis of RECOVERY



a standing wall that crumbles cracks
breaks and tumbles falling back
a faded sign two words ‘For Rent’
entombed and crushed in cold cement
the final ruins brittle, hollow
bitter pill for Earth to swallow

once a beauty in her prime
on heavens dance floor measured time
spinning once each day anew
showing off her finest view
of teeming life her ocean, land
with snowcapped mountains, burning sand

fueled by pompous pride worked harder
to produce a race she thought was smarter
bestowed with great intelligence
to voice her grace, magnificence
surrounded by her shining seas
the envy the galaxies

paths of grandeuresque delusion
meet their logical conclusion
Infernal race they chewed her skin
carved her face and dug within
her lines etched deep she showed her age
that one quick death blow did assuage

her scornful sun in rueful woe
beholds now poisoned rivers flow
with barren rock she stares at death
as shame still chokes each shallow breath
the evil race so bold and clever
defeated dead and gone forever

great falls find where pride doth go
recovery be hard and slow
wisened wings emerge and spread
to blanket deep the ugly dead
with richer soil bluer seas
whitened sands and taller trees

fresher air and cleaner skies
earth re-opens humbled eyes
the broken walls and rent unpaid
and footprint stains begin to fade
reminders of the race of men
mistake that won't be made again


Scheme AXBBCC DDEEFF GGXAHH IIJJKK CCLLGG CCMMHH NNOOPP
Poetic Form
Metre 01011101 1010101 01011111 01010101 010101010 10111110 1010001 11011101 1011101 1010101 11010101 1110101 101101110 1010111110 01110100 11011 01010101 0100100 111010 11100010 01011101 1010101 01111101 11111101 01010101 1110101 11011111 11111101 010111010 010101010 1111111 0101101 110101 11010101 1101101 110101 1010101 1110101 01010101 0110111 01010111 01111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,397
Words 244
Sentences 1
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 42
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 162
Words per stanza (avg) 34
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Submitted by BB8MITH on May 21, 2023

Modified by BB8MITH on May 23, 2023

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