Analysis of A Young Man

Joe Strickland 1986 (Hobbysville, SC)



A young man, burdened by the weight of past mistakes
Endlessly repeating the same trial, until he stings
Exhausted and worn, a shadow of his former self
Lost in hallucination, his mind lost in a mirage of prosperity

He longs for change, but cannot escape his past
His footsteps haunt him, an unshakable horror
He slips into darkness, seeking help but finding none
A scared kid, restless adult, a teenager on the move

Wandering between the spinning sky and earth below
Distress seeds sprout within, his nerves in turmoil swell
Alluring crystals tempt him with their fatal allure
His chest in pain, a collection of atoms that once unmixed

He falls apart, like ashes of long dead stars
Left with nothing but the ever-classy sadness that disfigures
The whining urge to rid himself of the remnants of his past
Turning, running, burning, leaving it all behind in the end.


Scheme AXXX BXXX XXXX XABX
Poetic Form
Metre 011101011101 10001001100111 010010111101 100010111000110100 11111100111 11111010010 1101101011101 0111001010101 1000101010101 01110111011 0101011111001 110100101101101 11011101111 11101010101011 010111011010111 101010101101001
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 868
Words 152
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 44
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 175
Words per stanza (avg) 37
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Written on May 20, 2023

Submitted by JoeStrickland on May 20, 2023

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Joe Strickland

I'm just a regular, blue collar, working stiff who took an interest in writing poetry many years ago but until recently I haven't had a desire to share any with anyone or pursue publication. I'm an unpublished fork lift operator by night, and a day drinker by choice. I can be followed on Twitter @JoeStricklandSC more…

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