Analysis of turtles lifey



Being a turtle stress me out
I live in the biggesnt house in the world
I get to be out and not in a enclosure
My shell is like a big rock
Its very heavy and weird
I love when the big people feed me my favorte food
Sweet strawberries is a must
Wit out strawberry i might die
My shell is the heaviest thing in the world
Its drags me down witch i hate
Sometimes little kids pick me up
They make me sticky
They make my body  feel like slime
Everything is so big to be
Your world is smaller than my world
It takes ages to walk
Sadly i wish i could talk
My shell is dark green
And my body is light green
If i eat to much food ill be like a volcano
BOOM POP SWISH
 I have family that shells are differents
Yellow, white even brown
I smel like grass and poop
Some love to slide on the ground
 If i walk for long i feel like ima die
My world is endless it never stops
Bugs are like sweets to me
Humans love giving hugs
Im very accent
And will live a long time
You can grow up with me
When im with my frends
Where called ceeps
A group of torties
i cant wait to get big
Ill be bigger than anything
Its “ crunch crunch cruch” when i eat
I wonder how long ill live
Ill live to the end of time

Stomp stop POW
Is all i hear when under ground
Deep deep in ground


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Poetic Form
Metre 10010111 110011001 111110100010 1111011 1101001 111011011111 110101 1110111 11101001001 1111111 01101111 11110 11110111 1011111 11110111 111011 1011111 11111 0110111 1111111110010 111 111001111 101101 111101 1111101 1111111111 111101101 111111 101101 11001 011011 111111 11111 111 0111 111111 1110110 1111111 1101111 1110111 111 11111101 1101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,261
Words 276
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 40, 3
Lines Amount 43
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 488
Words per stanza (avg) 133

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a turtles facts and life

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Written on May 08, 2023

Submitted by miyawhite95 on May 19, 2023

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