Analysis of Are you there?



The dark voices haunts me here

Oh dear God, Are you there??

This world is becoming merciless

We all are creating a huge mess

We are going towards dark

We couldn’t find your mark

We are losing our faith, our dignity

It’s in worst phase, it’s humanity

People love, they are fond of money

It’s scary, it doesn’t sound funny

You created the world, the world created standards

It reserved places for fashion icons not for the nerds

I know it sounds rude somewhere

Oh dear God, Are you there??


Scheme x A x x b b c c c c d d a A
Poetic Form
Metre 0110111 111111 111010100 111010011 1110011 11111 111010110100 101110100 101111110 11011110 1010010101010 1011011011101 111111 111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 510
Words 104
Sentences 2
Stanzas 14
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 27
Words per stanza (avg) 6

About this poem

This poem depicts the problem today's generation going through. How people are running behind money carelessly hurting people. This is disgusting which is conveyed to God by the poet.

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Submitted by on May 17, 2023

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V.S.Motewad

I am a student from India. I completed my 12th in year 2022. Now I am preparing for premedical entrance exam. I like writing poems from my teenage. The things happening around me are the inspiration of my poems. more…

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