Analysis of Liable



There comes a time to find,
One word appropriately used and fits...
To describe a mind vacant of common sense.
Yet the doing of it would solicit empathy.
Undeserved but witnessed serving,
Someone mentally sickened...
With a cemented narcissistic,
Self indulging existence.
Condoned.
From birth.
In one's mind permanently implemented.

Found liable.
For an act to commit.
Although habitually known to publicly admit,
Of visiting gutters where one feels comforted.
And shamelessly damaged.
However...
Supported and endorsed,
By followers who remain...
Loyal to the repetitive decadence of this.
Since...
No one addicted,
Seem capable to escape away...
From these scathing escapades.
Drugged they are and needing a fix,
Done to enhance the romancing of this B.S.
Defended to protect,
An image fictioned.
Kept visually projected.
Clear of fault and accusations alleged.

Blame it on the system.
Not the ones made,
Intentionally demented.
Blame it on the system.
Decaying from age,
And crumbling pretentions.
Claimed with alibis to use,
That others are the culprits abusing the rules.

Blame it on the system.
Not the ones made,
Intentionally demented.
Blame it on the system.
Deluded to fiction truth.
Fading.
From reality to face.
Fading.
From reality to face.
Fading.
From reality to face.
But reliable to deny lies.

Blame this on the system.
Not the ones made,
Intentionally demented.
And liable to make up more lies.
Told.
And liable to make up more lies.
Sold.
And liable to make up more lies!


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Poetic Form
Metre 110111 1101000101 10101101101 1010111010100 0111010 110010 10010010 1010010 01 11 0111000100 1100 111101 1010001110001 110010111100 010010 10 010001 1100101 1010010010011 1 11010 110010101 111010 11101001 11010010111 010101 1101 1100010 111001001 111010 1011 01000010 111010 01011 01001 111011 110101001001 111010 1011 01000010 111010 0101101 10 11011 10 11011 10 11011 101001011 111010 1011 01000010 010011111 1 010011111 1 010011111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,496
Words 302
Sentences 46
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 11, 19, 8, 12, 8
Lines Amount 58
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 236
Words per stanza (avg) 48
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Written on May 09, 2023

Submitted by lpahtillah on May 09, 2023

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