Analysis of The Leaden Echo and the Golden Echo

Gerard Manley Hopkins 1844 (Stratford, London) – 1889 (Dublin)



(Maidens’ song from St. Winefred’s Well)

THE LEADEN ECHO

How to kéep—is there ány any, is there none such, nowhere known some, bow or brooch or braid or brace, láce, latch or catch or key to keep
Back beauty, keep it, beauty, beauty, beauty, … from vanishing away?
Ó is there no frowning of these wrinkles, rankéd wrinkles deep,
Dówn? no waving off of these most mournful messengers, still messengers, sad and stealing messengers of grey?
No there ’s none, there ’s none, O no there ’s none,
Nor can you long be, what you now are, called fair,
Do what you may do, what, do what you may,
And wisdom is early to despair:
Be beginning; since, no, nothing can be done
To keep at bay
Age and age’s evils, hoar hair,
Ruck and wrinkle, drooping, dying, death’s worst, winding sheets, tombs and worms and tumbling to decay;
So be beginning, be beginning to despair.
O there ’s none; no no no there ’s none:
Be beginning to despair, to despair,
Despair, despair, despair, despair.

THE GOLDEN ECHO

Spare!
There ís one, yes I have one (Hush there!);
Only not within seeing of the sun,
Not within the singeing of the strong sun,
Tall sun’s tingeing, or treacherous the tainting of the earth’s air,
Somewhere elsewhere there is ah well where! one,
Oné. Yes I can tell such a key, I do know such a place,
Where whatever’s prized and passes of us, everything that ’s fresh and fast flying of us, seems to us sweet of us and swiftly away with, done away with, undone,
Undone, done with, soon done with, and yet dearly and dangerously sweet
Of us, the wimpled-water-dimpled, not-by-morning-matchèd face,
The flower of beauty, fleece of beauty, too too apt to, ah! to fleet,
Never fleets móre, fastened with the tenderest truth
To its own best being and its loveliness of youth: it is an everlastingness of, O it is an all youth!
Come then, your ways and airs and looks, locks, maiden gear, gallantry and gaiety and grace,
Winning ways, airs innocent, maiden manners, sweet looks, loose locks, long locks, lovelocks, gaygear, going gallant, girlgrace—
Resign them, sign them, seal them, send them, motion them with breath,
And with sighs soaring, soaring síghs deliver
Them; beauty-in-the-ghost, deliver it, early now, long before death
Give beauty back, beauty, beauty, beauty, back to God, beauty’s self and beauty’s giver.
See; not a hair is, not an eyelash, not the least lash lost; every hair
Is, hair of the head, numbered.
Nay, what we had lighthanded left in surly the mere mould
Will have waked and have waxed and have walked with the wind what while we slept,
This side, that side hurling a heavyheaded hundredfold
What while we, while we slumbered.
O then, weary then why
When the thing we freely fórfeit is kept with fonder a care,
Fonder a care kept than we could have kept it, kept
Far with fonder a care (and we, we should have lost it) finer, fonder
A care kept.—Where kept? Do but tell us where kept, where.—
Yonder.—What high as that! We follow, now we follow.—Yonder, yes yonder, yonder,
Yonder.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1011111 01010 11111111011111111111111111111111 11011101010110001 11110111011101 111101111101001100101010011 111111111111 11111111111 1111111111 010110101 10101110111 1111 10101011 10101010111011010100101 110101010101 1111111111 1010101101 01010101 01010 1 111111111 1010110101 101011011 11111000101011 11111111 11111101111101 1110101110111011011111111010011101101 01111110110010001 110110101110111 01011011101111111 10111101011 1111100111111111111111 1111010111011000101 101110010101111111110101 01111111110111 011101011010 11000101011011011 1101101010111110110 11011111101111001 1110110 111111010011 1110110111011111 111110011 111111 111011 101110111111001 100111111111 11100101111111010 011111111111 10111111011101011010 10
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 3,041
Words 538
Sentences 23
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 16, 1, 32
Lines Amount 51
Letters per line (avg) 45
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 455
Words per stanza (avg) 106
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on May 01, 2023

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