Analysis of Penmaen Pool

Gerard Manley Hopkins 1844 (Stratford, London) – 1889 (Dublin)



For the Visitors’ Book at the Inn

Who long for rest, who look for pleasure
Away from counter, court, or school
O where live well your lease of leisure
But here at, here at Penmaen Pool?

You’ll dare the Alp? you’ll dart the skiff?—
Each sport has here its tackle and tool:
Come, plant the staff by Cadair cliff;
Come, swing the sculls on Penmaen Pool.

What’s yonder?—Grizzled Dyphwys dim:
The triple-hummocked Giant’s stool,
Hoar messmate, hobs and nobs with him
To halve the bowl of Penmaen Pool.

And all the landscape under survey,
At tranquil turns, by nature’s rule,
Rides repeated topsyturvy
In frank, in fairy Penmaen Pool.

And Charles’s Wain, the wondrous seven,
And sheep-flock clouds like worlds of wool,
For all they shine so, high in heaven,
Shew brighter shaken in Penmaen Pool.

The Mawddach, how she trips! though throttled
If floodtide teeming thrills her full,
And mazy sands all water-wattled
Waylay her at ebb, past Penmaen Pool.

But what’s to see in stormy weather,
When grey showers gather and gusts are cool?—
Why, raindrop-roundels looped together
That lace the face of Penmaen Pool.

Then even in weariest wintry hour
Of New Year’s month or surly Yule
Furred snows, charged tuft above tuft, tower
From darksome darksome Penmaen Pool.

And ever, if bound here hardest home,
You’ve parlour-pastime left and (who’ll
Not honour it?) ale like goldy foam
That frocks an oar in Penmaen Pool.

Then come who pine for peace or pleasure
Away from counter, court, or school,
Spend here your measure of time and treasure
And taste the treats of Penmaen Pool.


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Poetic Form
Metre 101001101 111111110 01110111 111111110 1111111 11011101 111111001 1101111 1101111 0101011 0101101 1110111 1101111 01011001 11011101 10101 0101011 01101010 01111111 111111010 11010011 01111110 1110101 01111010 1011111 101101010 1110100111 1111010 1101111 110011010 11111101 111101110 11111 010111101 1101101 11111101 1111011 111111110 01110111 1111011010 0101111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,590
Words 273
Sentences 17
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 41
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 112
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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