Analysis of IS IT OKAY?

Regelyn Brade 2004 (Negros Occidental)



IS IT OKAY?

Is it okay to borrow some of your time?
Is it okay to hold you a while?
Does it okay if I'll hug and kiss you—
To let you know that I really love you?

Is it okay to keep yours a promise?
Is it okay to make with your memories?
Does it okay to wrote you a letter—
To tell you that we'll be forever?

Is it okay that we'll make our own love story?
Is it okay that we'll live ever after happily?
Does it okay that we'll love each other eternally—
Like you are my man, and I'm your lady?

Baby, please tell me if it would be okay
 Don't worry, 'cause I know already—
 That you and me were Meant to Be.


Scheme A XXBB XXCC DDDD ADD
Poetic Form
Metre 111 111111111 11111101 111111011 1111111011 111111010 1111111100 111111010 111111010 111111101110 1111111010100 1111111100100 1111101110 1011111111 110111010 11010111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 619
Words 143
Sentences 11
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 90
Words per stanza (avg) 26

About this poem

This poem was about asking for a love to someone.

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Written on April 15, 2023

Submitted by regelynasegurado29 on April 15, 2023

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Regelyn Brade

She's a girl who really loves writing poetry, poems, and stories. At the age of 16, she started joining online Writing Competition. For her, through writing, she can freely express her emotions, feelings, and thoughts. more…

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