Analysis of One more life

Kaynat zahid 2002 (Lahore)



When I was sitting all alone
Drained in memories full of stones
Dejected being, badly thrown
Desiring just once to be flown
Living life as someone's loan
Existence in this deadly zone
This is how i was grown

Now you are here to make me own
Consoling as nothing was gone
Comforting with your melodic tone
No flaws, defects to be shown
Accepting me from skin to bone
Giving an identity as a keystone
This is how i was known


Scheme AXAAAAA AXAAAAA
Poetic Form
Metre 11110101 10100111 01010101 010011111 101111 01001101 111111 11111111 01011011 100110101 1110111 01011111 1010100101 111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 422
Words 81
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 7, 7
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 170
Words per stanza (avg) 40

About this poem

God has always made a healer for you when you are at the edge of being lost. There is always a door open when all are closed

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Written on May 07, 2023

Submitted by kaynat_z on May 07, 2023

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