Analysis of Dead Tired. Two A M.



He was sleeping

On a a customer bench

By a table

Before him empty coffee cup

Economy copy of black Bible.

The HOLY BIBLE.

What was the story here.

I dare not wake him.

Student cramming late nighter?

Lonely and just plain

Needing the happy, silly

Sounds of Friday night

And there they were

Joking, storytelling, flirting.

Flexing what they got.

He just slept.

That Bible got me thinking.

I had been re-reading a Steinbeck

Novella…The Red Pony.

Bunch of them were personal

I made some notes on the

Back inside jacket.

The link for this blog site.

Words of encouragement.

Citing Psalms 37, 84 and 91.

Quietly I placed the

On top of his Bible.

I left. No other direct contact.

He was dead to the world.


Scheme A X B X B B X X C X D E C A X X A X D X F X E X X F B X X
Poetic Form
Metre 1110 1001001 1010 01110101 0100101110 01010 110101 11111 1010110 10011 1001010 11101 0110 1010010 10111 111 1101110 11111001 010011 1110100 111110 10110 011111 110100 1010 100110 111110 11110011 111101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 925
Words 225
Sentences 27
Stanzas 29
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 19
Words per stanza (avg) 4
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Written on May 06, 2023

Submitted by dougb.19255 on May 06, 2023

Modified by dougb.19255 on May 06, 2023

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Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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