Analysis of ASSET IN PLACE



For a week’s sin weak sing praise to a God
Paying to be saying, “Forgive me lord”
Yet truth they know ‘cause they mouth at the end
To every lord, god or mighty they say are men

Why pursue those pseudo Pzeus’ tho supposedly overhead?
There’s no fly Jesus pending back from the dead
Only 5G suspending so "Wake up!" It has to be said
I don't care what you believe or what you're fed

Once global brothers to an infallible trust we all had belong
Until a thief's fee saw us apart with new words, new tongue
Couldn't understand us so used fear to takeover
Scarred bodies and minds because of xenophobia

Had to follow cold worlds followed by hot tong
Yet it's not only those on cotton fields treated wrong
We're all in the same field but many haven't cottoned on
Your money is now master whilst your job's the bond

Three strikes for disobedience or lashed at your post
Whip cream of the crop into shape, promise them most
They always whips cream off the top, so typical
They crop the lot, stock and bar all…

from getting a fair share, holders of you
So the pool’s divvy then is tabled to miss queue
An ass set to stay in place with no forward move
Made to budge it at rates your boss approve

Some are too old to care, some too young to mind
In the middle's given up to their jobs they’ve resigned
Just another indent churned out to be among the worked forced
Never being human doing when being human being resourced


Scheme AXXX BBBB CXXX CCXX DDXX EEFF GGXA
Poetic Form Quatrain  (29%)
Metre 1011111101 1011100111 1111111101 1100111101111 101110110100101 11110101101 10101011111111 11111011111 11010110100111101 01011110111111 10011111110 110010110100 11101110111 1111011101101 11001111010101 110111011101 111010011111 111010111011 11111011100 11011011 1100111011 101101110111 111110111101 1111111101 11111111111 001101111101 101001111101011 1010101011010101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,433
Words 276
Sentences 3
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 40
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 159
Words per stanza (avg) 38
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