Analysis of EYE OF PROVIDENCE



(NOVUS ORDO SECLORUM /
 Eye of Providence) /

THE BEAM IN YOUR EYE

As I stand in the middle of Washington square
The obelisk holds you up high
The triangle is glaring
The beam in your eye

Boring into my mind
My cerebral cortex
Are you taking my picture
I can see the vortex
Into the abyss
Or is that just your dark stare?

We’re the next generation
-It just doesn’t seem fair
Has time really learned
how to fly?
No more selfie’s - no time
As we rush here to there

Solar flaring - global warming
As if there was no warning
Have we finally learned
how to prepare?
Is there hope for tomorrow
Or is this the end?

Frozen, so distant
Your gaze is persistent
Cutting me deep to the core
Hot like a laser
It shocks like a taser
Throwing me down to the floor

I feel a beast that is groping
As the breath of a zombie
Growls deep in my ear
And I know exactly why
Van Gogh cut his off!!

From this cold, Covid winter
Feel that chill in the air?
Have we met our final demise
Or am I just feeling
the eye of your needle
the pain of our final goodbye?
The true cutting edge
A prick from the needle
The scope of that beam in your eye?

End of days - revelations
A woman is crying
From the far West
Her children are dying

The needle is poking
The womb of The Whore
Her temple is burning
Like a nuclear war

The Beast has her yearning
For rest from her disease
Across her south borders,
Drug lords pushing northward
Big brother is watching
Just watching her die

The survivors are congress
Uncle Sam and Big Brother
We can no longer fill
Their fat pockets
We must be in the Last Days

The pain of your needle
So cold in my vein
As the drug travels through
The loss and the pain

Still questioning why
Yet, all I can feel is
The beam in your eye
That judgemental gaze
While I die

The street is my pillow
With the rest of the junkies
I gaze at the sky
The gray, empty sky

I am empty and loveless
Though a tear leaves my eye
I’m past feeling, it’s true
But, so are you
So are you

For, all I can see is
The Beam in your eye
That lancet, sky-needle
Space X hasn’t tried

A cold, heartless Judgement
Yet, it burns in my soul
Those scales of perdition
Only drug addicts know

The mark of that beast
His government caused
To God, with my last breath,
Have Mercy, I cry.

written in 2021
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/ “Our Lady of the Apocalypse”
              


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Poetic Form
Metre 111 11100 01011 111001011001 011111 010110 01011 100111 110010 1110110 111010 01001 1111111 001010 11111 11101 111 11111 111111 10101010 1111110 111001 1101 111101 11101 10110 111010 1011101 11010 111010 1011101 11011110 1011010 11011 0110101 11111 111110 111001 111101001 111110 011110 01110101 01101 011010 01111011 111010 010110 1011 010110 010110 01101 010110 101001 011010 111001 010110 111010 110110 11001 0010110 1010110 111101 1110 1110011 011110 11011 101101 01001 11001 111111 01011 10101 111 011110 1011010 11101 01101 1110010 101111 111011 1111 111 111111 01011 110110 1111 011010 111011 1111 101011 01111 11001 111111 11011 100 101 101010010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 2,379
Words 516
Sentences 10
Stanzas 22
Stanza Lengths 2, 1, 4, 6, 6, 6, 6, 5, 9, 4, 4, 6, 5, 4, 5, 4, 5, 4, 4, 4, 2, 1
Lines Amount 97
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 81
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

Symbology of Last Days / End of World prophecy / Final Judgment

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Written on 2022

Submitted by Dray4e on April 30, 2023

Modified on April 30, 2023

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