Analysis of JOURNEY IN A POD



Every living soul on earth are trained marine without weapons.
    The First water war i forth
I  survived it,  I was unconcious, with a Healthy heart, I'd rather not think about it

I Set the  pace and i Cleared my path
In the chromosone,  

There I was all by myself
In my  mamas womb.  He gave me breath of life,  I cant do nothing without him, he deserves  all the credit.

Because even in my fortys,  he still cares for me.  I don't have any idea what he looks like,  all I read was that he created me in his image, so I know he's got the same features I have.

He speaks in silence, and his visions are so clear. I spent nine months breathing in my own little pod filled with water, at some point I was communicating to my mum with my feets,  becausr I was all alone through the journey to Earth .

Well i wished i had a partner to share my Pod with throughout my trip,   some were paired in twos , in three's etc but I was  a Lone Marine...I came.out with tears of Joy and all the people around jubillated because I made it here in one piece.


Scheme XXX XX XX X X X
Poetic Form
Metre 1001011111010110 0110111 10111111010111011011 110101111 001 111111 01101111111111100111011010 0110011111111111001011111111110101011011111011011 1101001101111111100111011110111110100111111111101101011 1111101011111011110101011001110111111101010011011111011
Characters 1,052
Words 217
Sentences 11
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 3, 2, 2, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 79
Words per line (avg) 22
Letters per stanza (avg) 132
Words per stanza (avg) 37

About this poem

Just expressimg my gratitude and appreciation to God and also to my Late mum.

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Written on April 29, 2023

Submitted by Dqauils on April 29, 2023

Modified by Dqauils on April 29, 2023

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