Analysis of A Torrential Love : The Rapids of Passion



In my stream of consciousness, you are my roaring rapids,
A force that shapes and moves me through life's expanse,
A flow that swells and surges with each passing day,
A torrent that breaks down the barriers of my mind,
A power that guides me through the twists and turns of fate,
A current that carries me towards my desired state.

In you, my love, I find a strength beyond compare,
A force that empowers me to push past my limits,
A rush of energy that propels me forward with ease,
A surge of momentum that clears the obstacles in my path,
A wave of inspiration that fuels my creative fires,
A surge of excitement that ignites my inner desires.

Through the rapids of life, you remain my constant guide,
A beacon of hope that never fades or dims in the night,
A source of wisdom that illuminates the darkness of my soul,
A guiding star that leads me towards my ultimate goal,
A compass that steers me true amidst the storms of life,
A guardian angel that protects me from strife.

With you, my love, I feel an unbreakable bond,
A connection that transcends time and space,
A link that bridges the gap between heart and mind,
A union that unites the fragments of my being,
A love that surpasses all earthly boundaries,
A flame that burns eternal in my heart's sanctuary.

So let the rapids roar and the currents surge,
For in you, my love, I find my refuge,
A place of safety amidst life's raging storm,
A haven of peace where I am always warm,
A sanctuary of love where I am always free,
A paradise of bliss where I am always me.

In the stillness of my soul, I hear your voice,
A gentle whisper that soothes my troubled mind,
A calming presence that eases my fears,
A source of comfort that dries my tears,
A melody that resonates within my heart,
A symphony that plays from the very start.

Your love is the compass that guides my way,
The north star that never fades or strays,
The lighthouse that leads me home each night,
The beacon that shines through the darkest plight,
The sun that warms me on a winter's day,
The moon that lights my path on a midnight stay.

You are the pulse that beats within my veins,
The rhythm that moves me through life's refrains,
The breath that fills my lungs with air,
The life force that sustains me beyond compare,
The spark that ignites my passions aflame,
The fuel that drives me towards fortune and fame.

In the rapids of life, I know I can trust,
In the power of your love, I know I must,
For you are my rock, my anchor, my shield,
The one who stands by me on the battlefield,
The one who gives me strength to fight,
The one who guides me towards the light.

And so, my love, in my stream of consciousness,
You will forever be my roaring rapids,
A force that shapes and moves me through life's expanse,
A flow that swells and surges with each passing day,
A current that carries me towards my desired state,
A power that guides me through the twists and turns of fate.

The poem is part of a full version found in the book "Homo Sapiens" Part XVII, written by Mawphniang Napoleon. This book is part of the popular "Homo Sapiens" book series, which can be purchased online at various online bookstores, such as Amazon. The book is available for purchase for those who are interested in reading the complete version of the poem. Remember to get all the books from the "Homo Sapiens" series, as well as other books by the same author.

So, don't hesitate and get a copy today from one of the many online bookstores.

Khublei Shihajar Nguh,
Dhanewad
Thank you


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Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 3,535
Words 753
Sentences 16
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 1, 1, 3
Lines Amount 65
Letters per line (avg) 42
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 211
Words per stanza (avg) 50

About this poem

The poem is a beautiful and vivid expression of the speaker's deep and passionate love for someone who is their constant guide and source of strength. The metaphor of the roaring rapids is used throughout the poem to describe the forceful and dynamic nature of this love, which shapes and moves the speaker through life's challenges. The poem also touches on themes of trust, connection, and the power of love to overcome obstacles and guide us towards our desired state.  

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Written on July 20, 2022

Submitted by Mawphniang.Napoleon on April 24, 2023

Modified on April 30, 2023

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