Analysis of The flower: HEART

Tanishqa 2008 (Udaipur, Rajasthan)



I can find myself,
In the heart's corner;
A place meant just for me,
Where I'm the feelings gatherer.

Collecting love and care,
Except these, I don't care;
To borrow or lend, how dare?
And I'm smiling, nowhere!

I'm just teasing myself,
Extracting the nectar from the flower;
Where the flower is the heart,
And dancing in the colour shower.

I'm drifting myself,
I'm very light and tranquil.
I'm nudging the sweetness,
And still stolidly sitting quit .

This nectar is mocking me!
That this heart is so exquisite,
And listening to it,
Shuffling down to it, for a visit.

I'm rambling in the heart,
Desperately sitting with full hope;
I'll never move out of it,
Instead sit here in, and just moan.


Scheme ABCB DDDD ABEB AXXF CGFG EXFX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (67%)
Metre 1111 00110 011111 11010100 010101 011111 111111 01101 11101 0100101010 1010101 01000110 1101 1101010 110010 011101 1101101 11111100 010011 101111010 110001 100010111 1101111 01110011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 697
Words 150
Sentences 9
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 89
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

This is a poetry which is a beautiful account on *heart*, in which the reader is sitting........ Reading it will make you feel cherished and a little hearty.

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Written on September 08, 2022

Submitted by ushasharma1586 on April 16, 2023

Modified on April 16, 2023

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Tanishqa

I am Tanishqa, a student of class 10th. I am a 14 year old schoolgirl. I love to write poems an have just started to write, I have written 10 poetries till now. more…

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